In the Three Kingdoms with a System!

Tianlong was a historian, who was killed by an evil spirit which escaped the spirit road and brought five evil spirits, with it. So come, follow Tianlong on a journey as he travels, in the Three Kingdoms making a name for himself, while tracking down an evil spirit which escaped into the Three Kingdoms.  (PS, This is my first time writing a story like this and would like good, bad and positive criticization...