Save Scumming Vol One Feedback 3

So… I saw another author do something like this, read through the feedback, and found a lot of it really useful (mixed in with some that wasn't). The kind of stuff I sometimes only notice on long walks with Molly.

Since Save has a decent following here who are pretty vocal, I figured I'd try it too! This feels like a good time, right at the end of the first volume. I'm planning to start Vol. 2… uh… Monday? Like with Cinnamon Bun, I'll keep the chapter numbers rolling from where they left off. I… just like doing that.

Anyway, what do you think of Save Scumming so far? The characters, the setting, which scenes stood out, and were there any arcs that felt a little flat?

The tale has been illicitly lifted; should you spot it on Amazon, report the violation.

More importantly... look, I'm assuming that if you made it 150k words in, you've been enjoying it enough to stick around. But what would you like to see going forward? I'm not asking for detailed plot suggestions, just… scenes, vibes, perspectives, or whatever else you'd like to see! Were there things you liked a lot? Is there stuff you want more of?

Is it Jane? Do you want more Jane? I can provide more Jane. More Jane with less clothes on, even!

But really, lemme know what you think? We're only 20-ish chapters into the next volume, so there's time to adjust and add more of what you like (within reason!)

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