The Unwanted Son's Millionaire System
Chapter 30
CHAPTER 30: CHAPTER 30
The morning sunlight, thin and dirty, streamed into Ace’s room through the cheap blinds of Unit 7, casting harsh stripes across his face. He woke up suddenly, disoriented, the fading remnants of a nightmare still clinging to him—darkness closing in and Deke’s rasping voice echoing in his mind. For a brief, almost peaceful moment, all he heard was the quiet hum of the motel waking up. Then the memories hit him hard—the cramped storage closet, the recorder tightly in his hand, Deke’s chilling pause in the conversation, Evelyn launching the digital grenade... and the System’s cold, deafening silence that followed.
He sat up slowly, rubbing his tired eyes with his rough fingers. The fatigue hit him like a wave—he’d crashed hard after getting back from Evelyn’s place, the adrenaline finally bleeding away and leaving only bone-deep exhaustion. Now, the familiar, sharp pain started building behind his temples, strong and persistent.
SYSTEM NOTIFICATION
TASK UPDATE: GATHER EVIDENCE AGAINST DEKE
STATUS: COMPLETE
ANALYSIS: Primary objective achieved. Verifiable audio evidence secured (Silva Testimony / Deke Vance Direct Threats). Secondary corroborative evidence (Silva Testimony) logged. Evidence chain established.
REWARD: AUDIO ENHANCEMENT (Level 1) UNLOCKED
Finally, relief washed over him like a tide breaking against tired shores. He let out a sharp breath, the tension in his chest easing just a little. It’s done, he thought. The system verified the evidence... But the calm didn’t last. It quickly turned into irritation.
"Why the hell did it take so long?" he muttered, his voice thick with frustration. The wait overnight had made sense. The system needed time to analyze and verify but the silence had torn at his nerves. Every minute felt like hours.
Just as his frustration settled, something jarring hit him. It wasn’t pain exactly. More like the world around him had turned up way too loud, with every sound coming at him with sharp clarity.
He froze, his breath catching. His head throbbed not from pain but from a flood of noise crashing into his senses. It was as if someone had flipped a switch inside his mind and now every detail of sound around him was impossible to ignore or escape.
The dripping faucet in the sink wasn’t just a drip anymore. It had turned into a sharp, distinct plink... plink that echoed through the small room. Each drop sounded like a tiny bell ringing in the quiet, impossible to ignore.
From the walls came the groan of old pipes, a low mournful sound that vibrated beneath the floorboards. Ace could almost trace the water’s path flowing through narrow iron pipes beneath the motel, its movement alive beneath his feet.
Far beyond the thin walls, the distant rumble of city traffic filled the air. He heard the deep rumble of a bus passing by. Then the sharp whine of a motorcycle, followed by the faint screech of brakes somewhere down the street—a harsh break in the otherwise steady rhythm of the morning.
Outside, the chatter of birds filled the air. It wasn’t just a blur of chirping. Ace could pick out individual calls—sparrows, crows, pigeons, all talking in their own way. Each call was clear, a thread in the morning’s soundscape that his mind could separate and follow even though he couldn’t understand them.
He was also hearing his own heartbeat which was unnervingly loud in his ears.
It was overwhelming like sound was closing in from every direction. It was relentless and merciless. Ace clamped his hands tightly over his ears, desperate for any relief but it was useless. The noise wasn’t just around him it was inside his head, searing through him with shocking clarity.
He squeezed his eyes shut hard, trying to shut the world away, but the nausea hit like a rising tide, relentless and growing. He clenched his teeth against the queasiness twisting in his gut.
Too much... too much, he thought frantically, Filter it!
His mind raced as the panic set in. "Come on... come on..." he whispered through gritted teeth, willing the System to help, to take control, to quiet the storm.
As the panicked thought formed, the System interface subtly shifted.
AUDIO ENHANCEMENT (Level 1) ACTIVE
MODES: Passive Awareness / Focused Filtering / Amplification
WARNING: Sustained amplification or unfiltered passive input may cause sensory overload, migraines, or temporary deafness. Manage input carefully.
He clenched his jaw, desperation sharpening his focus. Filter. Turn it down. Tame the chaos. In his mind he pictured dials, knobs which were now sliding smoothly from frantic static to calm order. Slowly as if obeying his will, the overwhelming symphony of noise softened.
The city rumble faded to a background murmur, no longer battering his senses. The groan of the pipes eased into gentle creaks. Birdsong drifted in like a soft melody, faint and pleasant, pulling free from the noise crowding his ears.
With the noise dimming to a dull murmur, Ace shifted his attention on the Nite Owl Motel itself. The sounds inside suddenly felt vivid and clear.
He heard the low, muffled bass thumping from the TV in Unit 1A, its steady rhythm vibrating through the thin walls. From Unit 2B came the quiet creak of bedsprings—a small, almost soothing sound in the early morning hush.
Then he heard low murmur of conversation drifting up from near the office. It was Mike and another one whose voice sounds younger but it was unfamiliar for him. Cautiously, he tested amplification, focusing his hearing towards the office. The voices snapped into sharp clarity.
"Thanks for coming in early, Joey. Patrol the perimeter. Watch for anyone hanging around who seems out of place. Especially near Unit 7 or Apartment 2A."
Joey’s young voice sounded eager but cautious. "Unit 7? That’s the kid, right? The one Vance’s boys roughed up before?"
Mike’s tone hardened, a warning beneath the words. "Don’t ask questions you don’t need answers to. Just watch. Report anything weird. Double pay for the dawn shift, like I said. Vance is getting desperate. The kid poked the bear. Things might get messy."
Joey replied "Got it, boss. I’ll keep the kid and the barista safe. Eyes open."
Ace cut the amplification instantly, the sudden silence a relief to his overloaded senses. Double pay, he thought grimly. They’re serious about this.
His mind replayed the words: Watching Unit 7 and 2A... "Kid poked the bear." Mike wasn’t just being cautious he was expecting an attack. And it was because of him and Evelyn. Because of what they had set in motion. The System reward was powerful, terrifyingly so. But its first practical use hit hard with the sound of reality: the unmistakable confirmation that danger wasn’t just coming. It was already knocking on his door.
Ace swallowed hard, a cold weight settling in his chest. The uncompleted task loomed over him, heavier than ever before.
ACTIVE TASK: NEUTRALIZE DEKE PERMANENTLY
TIME REMAINING: 9 Days, 7 Hours, 48 Minutes
REWARD: INFO FINDER
PENALTY: PERMANENT -20% Strength & Coordination in Arms and Legs
He has nine days. The penalty wasn’t paralysis, but it was terrifying in its own way. A permanent 20% reduction in strength and coordination in his arms and legs. It would cripple his ability to fight, to run, to work with his hands – everything he relied on to survive. His grip would weaken. His blows would lose power. His balance would falter. He would become slower, clumsier, permanently diminished. The thought of fumbling with tools, stumbling while running, or being overpowered by even a weak thug sent a chilling wave of vulnerability through him. The Audio Enhancement felt like a powerful tool bought with a terrifying potential down payment.
A soft, deliberate knock sounded on his door. Even with his hearing turned down but still enhanced it came through clearly. It was Evelyn’s rhythm.
He unlocked the door and cracked it open. Evelyn stood on the other side, already dressed for the day in jeans and a sweater, her dark hair pulled back. Her expression was tense and alert but a fierce spark burned in her eyes. This time, she didn’t hold up a burner phone.
"Good morning Evelyn, do you need anything?" Ace asked softly, stepping back to let her inside. He closed the door behind her, careful not to mention the System reward out loud.
Evelyn shook her head as she paced the small room. "Morning Ace, Nothing direct. But the digital dead drop confirmation system I set up shows the package was accessed late last night, around 11 PM." She stopped and faced him. "He has it, Ace. Ramos has it. He heard the threats, the extortion, the use of his name... all of it. The grenade went off hours ago.
Ace felt a chill that had nothing to do with the morning air. Ramos had the proof all night. Deke had been living on borrowed time while Ace slept. "So... now what will we do? wait? See what Ramos does?"
"Ramos moves fast" Evelyn said, her voice low and certain. "He won’t tolerate that kind of disrespect, that kind of stupidity. Deke’s either running scared right now, or he’s about to do something monumentally stupid trying to cover his tracks or scrape together cash to throw at Ramos." She looked at Ace intently. "We need eyes and ears out there. We need to know what Deke does next. If he panics, he might lead us to something we can use. Something beyond what Ramos already knows. Something that gives us an edge."
Ace hesitated. He couldn’t explain how, but... "I might be able to help with the ’ears’ part," he said carefully. "I’ve acquired some experimental audio gear. It lets me pick up distant conversations and filter out background noise. I tested it this morning, and I heard Mike talking to a new security guy, Joey. They’re watching this place and yours. Mike is paying him well. Mike thinks Deke is desperate."
"Evelyn’s eyes widened, impressed and slightly wary. "Experimental audio gear? That’s... incredibly useful. And risky. But if it works..." A calculating look crossed her face. "That changes things. We don’t just hide. We listen. We need to find where Deke holes up, who he talks to when he’s cornered. Silva might hear something if Deke shows his face at the Anchor early, but that’s a gamble. We need a target. Let me check the dark web and street forums—see if there’s chatter about Deke’s movements or known hideouts. You focus on using those new gears of yours. See what you can pick up around his usual haunts. Be careful."
Ace nodded, his jaw tight. The new power in his head was a weapon. Evelyn was giving him a mission for it. The real countdown began: Neutralize Deke permanently. He saw it clearly: 9 Days, 7 Hours, 41 Minutes.
Ramos was on the move. Deke was desperate. Ace had a dangerous new tool. But failure meant his body would weaken permanently. He had to act. He had to use it to hunt before the hunter became the prey, or before his strength betrayed him forever.
This enhanced world of sound wasn’t just data. It was the frantic beat of a countdown he couldn’t afford to lose.